So, for this blog post I am writing the big and important thesis for my proposal essay.
I hope this is not the final copy as I need to perfect it but this is what i came up with so far.
My research on whether Christian counseling for all times of history is for everyone or not appears to be obviously accurate in that all counseling should come through the foundation of a biblical understanding.
Now I know its not the best but one has to start somewhere.
Be blessed,
Jess Guzman
Jess, I appreciate that you recognize the importance of just getting words written, because you're right, you have to start somewhere. Like you mention, I think the thesis could use some clarity. You seem to suggest that Christian counseling offers advantages or benefits to counseling clients that other forms of counseling cannot provide. Your thesis could be more effective if you explicitly name those benefits within the thesis sentence. Also, I'd like to see you rewrite your thesis using one of the templates provided in The Curious Researcher (pg. 158).
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